Monday, October 31, 2005

Oh this great forebodying feeling
of bad things coming to pass,
of sorrow and unhappiness
and loneliness unsought

Oh how these feelings torment me,
and make my heart desire.
of love and closeness and friendship,
and a coming joy within.

I wish to see these feelings,
if they be true or wrong
to see if I must keep writing
or end this faithless song

3 comments:

beatrice said...

One question:
What is a "Forebodying feeling"?

foreverlastinglife said...

are you asking a question there at the end? if so i'd say keep writing. you're very good.

X said...

Oh, lol. Forebodying feeling is misspelled.
Foreboding feeling I believe.