Oh, the emptiness of my soul
the shell of my life
were is the joy
of my previous days
That I would return
to long days past
and see the youth
of my child joy
But now oh soul
what can I feel
nothing but an empty grave
and hollow heart
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that sounds so sad. do you just write whatever comes to your mind or what?
Yes, pretty much.
Question, are you Stacy?
Oh good grIEf Will things can't be THAT bad.....
:-)
yeah i am. so how are things going?
Having trouble with the shift key Fa-So-La? Umm, I don't know if things are that bad but the poem brings all the bad out. (Not in living up here mind you) Things are good up here Foreverlastinglife. (Except for the SAT and ACT which I will be taking soon)
I suggest that you try and bring out some good things.
And yes, the shift key and I are not very good friends. :-)
SEE YA' SOON! REAL SOON!!!!
For me to write about something good is just blah. It never sounds interesting or anything so I never try. While this kind of writing really flows with me, writing about good things just doesn't work out. Anyway, most poets write about sad or evil things. Try to make peace with the shift key, he is better than the Caps lock key.
if youre talking about the two deleted comments im afraid that was my fault. i accidentally posted the same thing three times. ~ HH is in SEVEN DAYS!!!!!!!!!~
yeah thats true. most do.
Therefore we need more poets writing about the good things! Be different!
5 days!!!!!
As you see, shift and I have made up.
Good that you and shift made up. I am not really a poet. Just one who jots things done that come to my mind. Can't wait till HH!
hey! i'll see y'all tomorrow at the hill! all right! :) hey Will, what does Necrochron mean?
the literal term means "Day of Dying" but I use it very loosly kind of like that a plague of heart will kill you some day or that on my day of dying I will release my plague of heart. Just whatever I feel like but I lean more towards the last.
interesting. very interesting.
What is so interesting? Oh, I am working on another poem so I may have a new post soon.
Be Random
Darkside
so you won't get much*
Sorry about that. You probably didn't understanding what I was saying.
i just meant thats interesting. :)
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